Section IV Writing

　　Part A

　　Suppose you won a translation contest and your friend Jack wrote an email to congratulate you, and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to

　　1)thank him;

　　2)give your advice.

　　You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. Do not write the address .(10 point)

　　參考譯文

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.

　　As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. First and foremost, I strongly suggest you that you need to practice with painstaking effort in this field. What’s more, you had better have more communication with foreigners, which guarantees that you have a deep understanding of foreign culture. Last but not least, you are supposed to participate in some international events to accumulate a wealth of practical experience.

　　Thanks again and I do hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. I wish you have good luck and make a great success in your future study.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　如大家所見(jiàn)，這是2016年英語(yǔ)二小作文題目。英語(yǔ)（二）考綱的寫作部分，其實(shí)主要考查學(xué)生的應(yīng)用能力，考查范圍包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等，還應(yīng)能寫一般描述性、敘述性和說(shuō)明或議論性的文章；而要求考生根據(jù)所給情景寫出一篇約100詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)）的應(yīng)用性短文。

　　作為寫作B部分的小作文總分10分，大家要抓住得分點(diǎn)。小作文在評(píng)分時(shí)有如下評(píng)分要點(diǎn)：1.信息點(diǎn)——覆蓋全面；2.內(nèi)容——組織連貫；3.語(yǔ)言——準(zhǔn)確性；4.格式——符合要求；5.語(yǔ)域——恰當(dāng)。

　　預(yù)料之中，今年英語(yǔ)二的小作文再次考查了書信體，并且考查的信件可以說(shuō)是雜糅型的。這在2011年英語(yǔ)二中出現(xiàn)了同樣的考查方式：

　　Suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admitted to a university write him/her a letter to：

　?。?）Congratulate him/her，and

　?。?）give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter，Use zhangwei.

　　同樣的考查方式，足以說(shuō)明一件事情——絕對(duì)要重視考研真題。老師們總在強(qiáng)調(diào)真題的重要性，好多同學(xué)不與重視，希望大家以后一定要強(qiáng)化這種認(rèn)識(shí)。

　　下面我們來(lái)詳細(xì)解讀下今年的小作文，首先看一下題目要求：

　　稱呼： Dear Jack注意稱呼中，后面的逗號(hào)不可丟，也不能寫成冒號(hào)。

　　正文

　　建議大家三步走策略——簡(jiǎn)潔、直接、明了：寫作目的、寫作是由、重申目的

　　第一段：寫作內(nèi)容需涵蓋兩點(diǎn)：寫信目的，表明感謝來(lái)自朋友的祝賀；可以采用這樣的表達(dá)方式：I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.

　　第二段： 寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)以建議為主體。在這個(gè)過(guò)程中可以把日常我們?nèi)绾翁岣叩姆绞綄戇M(jìn)正文，比如多加練習(xí)、多與外國(guó)人交流，多多接觸國(guó)際事務(wù)等。本篇老師主要從這些方面進(jìn)行論述，表達(dá)如下As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. First and foremost, I strongly suggest you that you need to practice with painstaking effort in this field. What’s more, you had better have more communication with foreigners, which guarantees that you have a deep understanding of foreign culture. Last but not least, you are supposed to participate in some international events to accumulate a wealth of practical experience.

　　第三段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)重申寫信目的，如Thanks again and I do hope you could take my suggestions into consideration. I wish you have good luck and make a great success in your future study.

　　落款： Yours sincerely, 特別提醒sincerely后面逗號(hào)不能丟；簽名： Li Ming特別注意 Ming 后面一定不能出現(xiàn)句點(diǎn)。